After just finishing chapter 16 (Currently the last chapter you can read due to obviously still being in production) and Holy sh*t. The story, the art, the character's personalities and designs, the soundtrack, etc. All of it has had me hooked since the very first chapter. This game/VN is... amazing.
11/10.
I'm unbelievably excited for whenever the next update is.
Genuinely, one of the best stories I've read and experienced. Even big companies that make games can't hold a candle to how much this game got me to feel emotionally about all the characters. I just finished it and I would rant but I don't want to waste your time. I highly recommend this game to everyone even if you aren't usually into this stuff, it is so good and I love the setup to everything. 10/10 will be keeping track of this, good job development team!
Okay, as much as I'd like to love the visual novel, the writing style is just not it for me. I get "white room" in between character dialogues and the narrative, the prose itself doesn't feel strong or evocative, especially in the scenes with slow pacing. I think the pacing definitely could be fixed to be faster than it is and the writing style could be improved. Some just feel too slow and boring. The art for the background and the characters meet my expectations well. The music is also atmospheric. Overall the writing just needs quite a bit of work.
So far characterization is really well done so far.
However, I'm still in Chapter 4 and my thoughts are subject to change.
This story had me borderline crying once Cyrus got his memories back and when he visited his home. I love how this Story didn't get afraid to get real dark and real quick. Easily one of the VN's I've ever read.
i just read up to the part were cyrus finally meets titiania and i kept imagining if she was acutally diana our childhood friend and her code name was titania but a little dissapointed but still nice that we finally get to see her, she looks super badass
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i love this VN! just got done with arc 2,cant wait for the next chapters!
Need some help!
I updated the game but couldn't find the chapter 17 , what should I do?
It's for patreon for now, not general release. In one month or so the link will be 0.17 version.
one more month to go lmaoo, but thanks for the release!
FINALLY NEW CHAPTERRR
This is my favorite VN. This story has grabbed my heart and then ripped it to shreads, 10/10
Lance 😭😭😭
I can't tell you how good this VN is
So if you haven't played it yet WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR
GO PLAY IT NOW
Someone can drop me some translation for PT-BR pls?
Made an itch.io account just so I could say this.
After just finishing chapter 16 (Currently the last chapter you can read due to obviously still being in production) and Holy sh*t. The story, the art, the character's personalities and designs, the soundtrack, etc. All of it has had me hooked since the very first chapter. This game/VN is... amazing.
11/10.
I'm unbelievably excited for whenever the next update is.
Love y'all!
Honestly best vn I read just with ony let down that mc can't do naughty naughty with axel or any potential romance interest
The whole community have been showing lance all kind of love and attention he didn’t get in the story ,
I’m going to be so sad if this goes uncontinued 😭
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Don’t worry, the whole community is ready to help the developers to ensure the project is still going, even by force :)
Genuinely, one of the best stories I've read and experienced. Even big companies that make games can't hold a candle to how much this game got me to feel emotionally about all the characters. I just finished it and I would rant but I don't want to waste your time. I highly recommend this game to everyone even if you aren't usually into this stuff, it is so good and I love the setup to everything. 10/10 will be keeping track of this, good job development team!
Okay, as much as I'd like to love the visual novel, the writing style is just not it for me. I get "white room" in between character dialogues and the narrative, the prose itself doesn't feel strong or evocative, especially in the scenes with slow pacing. I think the pacing definitely could be fixed to be faster than it is and the writing style could be improved. Some just feel too slow and boring. The art for the background and the characters meet my expectations well. The music is also atmospheric. Overall the writing just needs quite a bit of work.
So far characterization is really well done so far.
However, I'm still in Chapter 4 and my thoughts are subject to change.
Well yeah it was a bit slow in the earlier chapters but it does pick up.
But I think the writing is good. Thou they did remove a few things that I wished stayed.
thought that i could get through this, even after the cooper arc
then chapter 9 happened
dont even know if I can keep playing IT HURTSSS
Its been 134 months 😔
Yeah... I think unfinished fvns are the rule...
This Game Is Amazing🔥
Also
I Need More 10000000000/10
This story had me borderline crying once Cyrus got his memories back and when he visited his home. I love how this Story didn't get afraid to get real dark and real quick. Easily one of the VN's I've ever read.
i just read up to the part were cyrus finally meets titiania and i kept imagining if she was acutally diana our childhood friend and her code name was titania but a little dissapointed but still nice that we finally get to see her, she looks super badass
Any news on the next build. Wonder if I missed a Taking a Break notice.
A new build was planned to be released over a month ago, but I guess something caused a delay?
I hate you... but I love you... but I hate you... Cooper!!!😭😭I like Axel but I love Cooper even more😭
this makes me both very happy and really sad 10/10
I CAN FIX HIM