This is, hands down, one of the best VNs I've read in the past few years. The story was strong and appealing. I liked how the story was written, and how the dedication to the plot shines through. (Also, I know some people have it hard in writing stories and I apologize, but this story was so well-written with expertise and grammar mastery that I couldn't help jumping with joy as I read along the lines.) The characters were very likeable, and have good character developments (albeit one for the worst 🥲). To be honest, Cooper grew on me (and yes, I refuse to call him Lance lol). I don't know if everyone who read it experienced the same, all the more not expecting y'all to hope the same, but I kinda want a redemption arc. Cyrus doesn't need to get back with him (not that they were a thing [not to promote cheating on Damion. Don't cheat guys.]), but at least let him redeem himself or make it up to Cyrus in some way. Deep down, I believe Cooper's in the same boat of loneliness, and what he keeps doing to people like Cyrus was something he got used to in order to obtain money in hopes to quench his search for happiness (ultimately, using that happiness as an escape from the experiences that hurt him in the past), which is bad in itself. But, yeah we all have our opinions. To each their own! Going baaaaaack; lastly, the CGs. Oh my gosh, the CGs were amazing. The sprites? All the more so. I also appreciate the GIFs. Can't say I've read a visual novel with GIFs, but I'll gladly welcome more. It increases the immersiveness (and makes it all the more heartwarming UwU).
Good job, Author Jericho, Alusiren, Azzy-Lionblood and the rest of the team! Y'all are amazing! Keep doing your best! You certainly have my support, but not in terms of monetary value, sadly.
*cries in student allowance*
Looking forward to more! Thank you! 💖
P.S. Gauge my interest in Cooper after everything that happened?
I absolutely love this visual novel! The characters and the story is very well written, the game feels very polished! There is a very good ammount of story available i think the average person might be able to finish it in a day. I cannot wait to see what awaits in build 7! Keep up the good work on the vn!
This game is, hands down across the board, amazing. Before I go further, I'll be brushing upon the story, so spoilers ahead.
To start off, I absolutely must praise the character development. At first I was hesitant to try this game, but as I got past the first chapter I knew this was gold. At first I truly did not like Lance (Cooper), but the story got me to warm up to him at the same pace with Colin. The small moments where some semblance of kindness seemed to shine through kept me slowly easing up, and set me up for the absolute drop when we realized Lance was just selling us back to get harvested in Reboon (forgive me if I mispelled the city name wrong, my memory can be short). Long story, I was absolutely jaw-dropped. I realized quite late that the amazing character development and plot had made me forget about the description of the main page alluding to this betrayal, and when I did realize I was double jaw-dropped. Needless to say, my opinions of Lance have vastly swayed, leaving me really on-par with Colin's point of view.
Rose has easily become one of my favourite characters of the game, perhaps even placing pretty high in my favourite characters ever. Don't ask why, but everything about their character is just bliss. Same goes for the entire dynamic between the group, which makes everyone just so much more interesting- I can tell a lot of work went into making them just right, and dear Lord did it pay off!
It's only now as I'm tying that I notice I've failed to bring up more than just characters, but it's hard not to. They're just done so well!
In regards to story, the game somehow manages to constantly beat itself every chapter- it just gets better and better every time. It's hard to describe why, more just an experience it for yourself sort of thing, I suppose.
I find it difficult to bring even the sightest bad thing about this game. The only issue I encountered in grammar (I'm very picky with grammar and did not find a SINGLE issue. Wowee..) was some random "}" hanging around near the beginning on the Android build. Beyond that, the game is genuinely.. Flawless. It's almost like an actual, high end studio put the game together rather than a bunch of furries with fur-for-brains. I genuinely cannot praise the game enough- good job devs. This is easily going to end up as my #1 or #2 FVN of all time (close tie with Echo right now.. We'll see how that goes).
Does Axel have black scleras and white pupils or does his eyes look like a panda's? I'm confused, buy if it's the latter I'd have a hard time seeing it that way
Hey I don't know if you're allowed to tell me this yet but, will there be a chance in this VN's future to have any romantic route/interaction with Cooper?
Also will there be any NSFW scenes/content? I'm only inquiring because I'm considering recommending this VN to a friend, but I first just want to know in general what you mean when you say this VN is 18+.
from what ive seen, the VN is completely linear and due to the protagonist's asexuality there will be no real sex scenes (at least involving the mc) but there has been nudity
I don't think mc being asexual means he won't ever have sex, but it being linear does mean there's gonna be 1 winner out of the possible love interests. I can just hope it's the one I like the most.
I'm extremely worried for Cyrus because Axel's group couldn't tell Cyrus that what happened to him before or his planet or something else but I really hope that Cyrus doesn't get even more traumatized than before, just extremely worried for Cyrus.
just downloaded the latest version and it wouldnt let me go to my quick save and it seems the only option i have is to restart is there a way to fix it or do i have to play from the start again in on windows btw
so cyrus has so far: woken up in an alley, torn away from his past, been ultimately betrayed by someone he trusted and loved, and is now completely at the mercy of yet another person(s) with no idea of whats going on. i feel like the only thing keeping him sane is the notion that his friends, family, and partner still exist out there and are within his reach. hes currently in a state of denial and if that gets shut down im worried hes going to do something really drastic. hes been put through a whole lot and nobody seems to really be taking his mental health into consideration. i predict that this is going to pose a really big problem in the future.
cant your hair lose pigmentation if your body goes through extreme trauma? anyways thats what i was thinking when i played through
oh and for the ports i believe that they exist for direct access to his spinal chord (for administering sedatives etc) and for lance getting angry when he found out im selfishly believing that he does somewhat care about cyrus' wellbeing (i really want him to have some sort of redemption)
well im no professional either but im sure there are drugs that would help the preservation of organs when they were harvested from his body. but now that i think about it if he was consistently drugged he would have been going through withdrawls shortly after staying with lance so im really not sure. the idea that they are put in place to keep him numbed is my second guess though
i just had a revelation: how would cyrus know how to write perfectly in a world where nobody uses paper anymore? his memory of things is way too specific for me to think he had any memories implanted
I'm so immersed to the story that I couldn't wait for the next upcoming update. Also I'm very much in love with Axel as well but still holding on to a fact that Lance is a good guy deep within his heart. I just wish we could know why he does that, sell his human friends and all. I really feel like theres more than to it besides from money~ TwT
i think his real name is aaron because his name was almost slipped up during the dialogue in the invisible car and it started with aa. (kind of a stretch but aaron is the only name i know that starts with two a's)
Just finished the build 6 and WOWW, still strong with the mysteries and emotions. Such an underrated gem. Now we just have to wait 2 months for another build :(
Ouch. Just......ouch. SPOILERS, obviously, but goddamn such a big twist was unexpected. Gives me a very similar feeling to how Denji felt about Makima at the end of Chainsaw Man; the MC still caring about a person that definitely wronged them because of the care they gave them in their respective story-lines. But I expected it even less in a Furry Virtual Novel of all things, but I could feel something HAD to go wrong when the bus-scene began.
I must be a masochist, because this is definitely a great read. God I hope Axel, Rose, and Ring can treat Cyrus better....And can't help but hope for a scene where Cyrus and You-Know-Who either reconcile or gets his shit beaten out of him. Can't help but feel if the story doesn't give You-Know-Who some comeuppance then It'll feel pretty unsatisfying, but we'll see. I'm leaning towards getting some payback, but that may or may not change.
ANYWAYS, sorry for the rant, but I had to get my thoughts out somewhere. To the Team- Thanks for an amazing read! I look forwards to seeing more in the Future.
As stated in the devlog and the notice above downloads, previous saves will not work due to the code restructure. You will need to delete them or create new ones.
Update finished, and I can say I already really like Ring, Rose and Axel
definitively would have slept with Axel
Ring is basically a tsundere, Axel is a walking fluffball and Rose gives huge big sis vibes, they're a fun group
Also, potential spoilers but my theory about what's going to happen :
Can we all agree that the secret they'll have to share with Cyrus is about his memories ?
I'm pretty sure his "past life" is a false memory implanted by Resoom or something like that, meaning he never lived there and never had a boyfriend in the first place
I'm surprised Cyrus didn't even consider it in the first place since he awakened, but I guess that's normal when you go through these kind of events
That's an interesting take, i honestly thought that the secret was going to be that Earth was destroyed and he cant go home, or that his boyfriend was dead
Super sorry! We're working on actually revamping the coding for the entire VN. We're gonna try and push out the next public update with that coding, instead of using the Patreon version. It should be done soon!
I mean, as long as everything is going alright and it is still being made, I can wait as it is worth it to do so. Do not stress yourselves. Its just the lack of information that drives people nuts. ♥
I still wonder if Cooper genuinely cares about Cyrus or he just sees him as an item that would bring him a lot of money when he sells it
I mean, when they're in the train, Cyrus is being nervous and anxious that this is the last day when he sees Cooper, while Cooper is just sitting and happily searching for the lodestar's price. I think that already shows that he only cares about money and nothing about Cyrus personally
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This is, hands down, one of the best VNs I've read in the past few years. The story was strong and appealing. I liked how the story was written, and how the dedication to the plot shines through. (Also, I know some people have it hard in writing stories and I apologize, but this story was so well-written with expertise and grammar mastery that I couldn't help jumping with joy as I read along the lines.) The characters were very likeable, and have good character developments (albeit one for the worst 🥲). To be honest, Cooper grew on me (and yes, I refuse to call him Lance lol). I don't know if everyone who read it experienced the same, all the more not expecting y'all to hope the same, but I kinda want a redemption arc. Cyrus doesn't need to get back with him (not that they were a thing [not to promote cheating on Damion. Don't cheat guys.]), but at least let him redeem himself or make it up to Cyrus in some way. Deep down, I believe Cooper's in the same boat of loneliness, and what he keeps doing to people like Cyrus was something he got used to in order to obtain money in hopes to quench his search for happiness (ultimately, using that happiness as an escape from the experiences that hurt him in the past), which is bad in itself. But, yeah we all have our opinions. To each their own! Going baaaaaack; lastly, the CGs. Oh my gosh, the CGs were amazing. The sprites? All the more so. I also appreciate the GIFs. Can't say I've read a visual novel with GIFs, but I'll gladly welcome more. It increases the immersiveness (and makes it all the more heartwarming UwU).
Good job, Author Jericho, Alusiren, Azzy-Lionblood and the rest of the team! Y'all are amazing! Keep doing your best! You certainly have my support, but not in terms of monetary value, sadly.
*cries in student allowance*
Looking forward to more! Thank you! 💖
P.S. Gauge my interest in Cooper after everything that happened?
*Classified*
I absolutely love this visual novel! The characters and the story is very well written, the game feels very polished! There is a very good ammount of story available i think the average person might be able to finish it in a day. I cannot wait to see what awaits in build 7! Keep up the good work on the vn!
This game is, hands down across the board, amazing. Before I go further, I'll be brushing upon the story, so spoilers ahead.
To start off, I absolutely must praise the character development. At first I was hesitant to try this game, but as I got past the first chapter I knew this was gold. At first I truly did not like Lance (Cooper), but the story got me to warm up to him at the same pace with Colin. The small moments where some semblance of kindness seemed to shine through kept me slowly easing up, and set me up for the absolute drop when we realized Lance was just selling us back to get harvested in Reboon (forgive me if I mispelled the city name wrong, my memory can be short). Long story, I was absolutely jaw-dropped. I realized quite late that the amazing character development and plot had made me forget about the description of the main page alluding to this betrayal, and when I did realize I was double jaw-dropped. Needless to say, my opinions of Lance have vastly swayed, leaving me really on-par with Colin's point of view.
Rose has easily become one of my favourite characters of the game, perhaps even placing pretty high in my favourite characters ever. Don't ask why, but everything about their character is just bliss. Same goes for the entire dynamic between the group, which makes everyone just so much more interesting- I can tell a lot of work went into making them just right, and dear Lord did it pay off!
It's only now as I'm tying that I notice I've failed to bring up more than just characters, but it's hard not to. They're just done so well!
In regards to story, the game somehow manages to constantly beat itself every chapter- it just gets better and better every time. It's hard to describe why, more just an experience it for yourself sort of thing, I suppose.
I find it difficult to bring even the sightest bad thing about this game. The only issue I encountered in grammar (I'm very picky with grammar and did not find a SINGLE issue. Wowee..) was some random "}" hanging around near the beginning on the Android build. Beyond that, the game is genuinely.. Flawless. It's almost like an actual, high end studio put the game together rather than a bunch of furries with fur-for-brains. I genuinely cannot praise the game enough- good job devs. This is easily going to end up as my #1 or #2 FVN of all time (close tie with Echo right now.. We'll see how that goes).
Conclusion? Just play the game. I beg you.
Does Axel have black scleras and white pupils or does his eyes look like a panda's? I'm confused, buy if it's the latter I'd have a hard time seeing it that way
really love the moment when the horizon was getting brighter just behind Cooper's smile
Hey I don't know if you're allowed to tell me this yet but, will there be a chance in this VN's future to have any romantic route/interaction with Cooper?
Also will there be any NSFW scenes/content? I'm only inquiring because I'm considering recommending this VN to a friend, but I first just want to know in general what you mean when you say this VN is 18+.
from what ive seen, the VN is completely linear and due to the protagonist's asexuality there will be no real sex scenes (at least involving the mc) but there has been nudity
I don't think mc being asexual means he won't ever have sex, but it being linear does mean there's gonna be 1 winner out of the possible love interests. I can just hope it's the one I like the most.
I'm extremely worried for Cyrus because Axel's group couldn't tell Cyrus that what happened to him before or his planet or something else but I really hope that Cyrus doesn't get even more traumatized than before, just extremely worried for Cyrus.
Lookin' forward for the next update, Jericho!
just downloaded the latest version and it wouldnt let me go to my quick save and it seems the only option i have is to restart is there a way to fix it or do i have to play from the start again in on windows btw
You will have to make a new file due to the new coding, you should be able to skip ahead though!
doing it now thx
spoilers and theory:
so cyrus has so far: woken up in an alley, torn away from his past, been ultimately betrayed by someone he trusted and loved, and is now completely at the mercy of yet another person(s) with no idea of whats going on. i feel like the only thing keeping him sane is the notion that his friends, family, and partner still exist out there and are within his reach. hes currently in a state of denial and if that gets shut down im worried hes going to do something really drastic. hes been put through a whole lot and nobody seems to really be taking his mental health into consideration. i predict that this is going to pose a really big problem in the future.
Spoilers and theory:
OMG we were in the Matrix
cant your hair lose pigmentation if your body goes through extreme trauma? anyways thats what i was thinking when i played through
oh and for the ports i believe that they exist for direct access to his spinal chord (for administering sedatives etc) and for lance getting angry when he found out im selfishly believing that he does somewhat care about cyrus' wellbeing (i really want him to have some sort of redemption)
well im no professional either but im sure there are drugs that would help the preservation of organs when they were harvested from his body. but now that i think about it if he was consistently drugged he would have been going through withdrawls shortly after staying with lance so im really not sure. the idea that they are put in place to keep him numbed is my second guess though
i just had a revelation: how would cyrus know how to write perfectly in a world where nobody uses paper anymore? his memory of things is way too specific for me to think he had any memories implanted
I'm so immersed to the story that I couldn't wait for the next upcoming update. Also I'm very much in love with Axel as well but still holding on to a fact that Lance is a good guy deep within his heart. I just wish we could know why he does that, sell his human friends and all. I really feel like theres more than to it besides from money~ TwT
I love Axel, I just wish I know what his real name is
i think his real name is aaron because his name was almost slipped up during the dialogue in the invisible car and it started with aa. (kind of a stretch but aaron is the only name i know that starts with two a's)
came back to this post after the most recent build. completely called it lol
lmao yeah I ended up buying patreon when build 7 was released and I was happy to know I was right
cute
Question. So I know this says 18+ but after finding something important out I assume theres no nsfw scenes or am I wrong?
if your asking for sex scenes then mostly likely no the mc is asexual
so far there has been nudity but yeah i dont really expect any full-on sex scenes (which i am completely fine with)
This build is so fricking perfect, can't wait for next update4
spoilers
if
cooperlance doesn't get at least some kind of redemption route im suingJust finished the build 6 and WOWW, still strong with the mysteries and emotions. Such an underrated gem. Now we just have to wait 2 months for another build :(
I heard they said builds should come more often now that they're done with the visual overhaul. So hopefully less than 2 months!
god i love your art style everyone is just so soft and expressive
Ouch. Just......ouch. SPOILERS, obviously, but goddamn such a big twist was unexpected. Gives me a very similar feeling to how Denji felt about Makima at the end of Chainsaw Man; the MC still caring about a person that definitely wronged them because of the care they gave them in their respective story-lines. But I expected it even less in a Furry Virtual Novel of all things, but I could feel something HAD to go wrong when the bus-scene began.
I must be a masochist, because this is definitely a great read. God I hope Axel, Rose, and Ring can treat Cyrus better....And can't help but hope for a scene where Cyrus and You-Know-Who either reconcile or gets his shit beaten out of him. Can't help but feel if the story doesn't give You-Know-Who some comeuppance then It'll feel pretty unsatisfying, but we'll see. I'm leaning towards getting some payback, but that may or may not change.
ANYWAYS, sorry for the rant, but I had to get my thoughts out somewhere. To the Team- Thanks for an amazing read! I look forwards to seeing more in the Future.
hey had an issue and i cant access my saves and when i play it sends me all the way to the beginning like starting a new save
Yup, old saves don't work due to new code, gonna need to make new ones
As stated in the devlog and the notice above downloads, previous saves will not work due to the code restructure. You will need to delete them or create new ones.
My first time going through this VN. That's a masterpiece for sure. Hope to see more.
Thank you for your great work
Update finished, and I can say I already really like Ring, Rose and Axel
definitively would have slept with Axel
Ring is basically a tsundere, Axel is a walking fluffball and Rose gives huge big sis vibes, they're a fun group
Also, potential spoilers but my theory about what's going to happen :
Can we all agree that the secret they'll have to share with Cyrus is about his memories ?
I'm pretty sure his "past life" is a false memory implanted by Resoom or something like that, meaning he never lived there and never had a boyfriend in the first place
I'm surprised Cyrus didn't even consider it in the first place since he awakened, but I guess that's normal when you go through these kind of events
Anyway, I'm eager to see what will happen next !
or they keep him alive for that long or he cant age
Spoilers
That's an interesting take, i honestly thought that the secret was going to be that Earth was destroyed and he cant go home, or that his boyfriend was dead
me when i see Axel for a nanosecond
I'm just starting to play the update and I already love him
He's nice. And big. And FLUFFY
And those smirks man
thank you for fixing it
Hello, sorry about that. The games needed to be re-uploaded and should be available now.
IT'S HERE 🤩
ahh...its here, no more heart breaks yea?
whenever i click on the game its not loading. sorry if i dont make im a bit tired from today
HRGNGNG READING TIME
wasnt it a Zip file for windows? why is it now rar and how do i get to open that?
Hello there. It seems we made a mistake with uploading the PC version. The ZIP version should be uploaded within the hour.
so when will the update drop? :
:|
Istg I am in love with this V.N, THERE'S JUST SO MUCH I CAN'T EXPLAIN OMG
wen is the next part out its been 1 month?
I dunno but I wouldn't be surprised if it takes longer
Wow...just wow. What an absolute delight of a VN. I loved every single moment of this.
I really hope they haven't just forgotten to post it here as well, as it has been a month already since it was released into patreon 😞
Super sorry! We're working on actually revamping the coding for the entire VN. We're gonna try and push out the next public update with that coding, instead of using the Patreon version. It should be done soon!
Doesn't that mean previous save files will stop working?
Also, by soon you mean within the week or longer? I'm so hyped for this chapter and I can't wait to see what happens!
Old saves will not work with the new coding update!
I mean, as long as everything is going alright and it is still being made, I can wait as it is worth it to do so. Do not stress yourselves. Its just the lack of information that drives people nuts. ♥
Really looking forward to reading more soon!
Wow I wasn't expecting that double twist at the ending of Arc 1
Colored me surprised, but I still have complete faith in Cooper. He's precious.
The white tiger (Alex ?) looks wholesome too, I already like him
I felt so betrayed at the end ;-;
I still wonder if Cooper genuinely cares about Cyrus or he just sees him as an item that would bring him a lot of money when he sells it
I mean, when they're in the train, Cyrus is being nervous and anxious that this is the last day when he sees Cooper, while Cooper is just sitting and happily searching for the lodestar's price. I think that already shows that he only cares about money and nothing about Cyrus personally
love the work i almost get dystopia vibes keep it up <3