I'm familiar with crying due to tragic things happening in fiction, but this is one of those great pieces of art where the characters are written so well that I find myself crying even more when I get to see the characters thriving.
Y'know, the game was fucking amazing through all of chapters 1-16, but I think chapter 17 pushed it over the edge, and sent it hurdling down at the speed of light into the gaping hole known as "perfect". First VN to make me cry tears of happiness AND sadness, so for that, I thank you. I cannot wait for the next chapter, and the side-stories. Will definitely be buying the Patreon when chapter 18 releases.
Duuuuude, this VN rocks so much! Each update, and I'm hooked more and more. Amazing piece of media, such great work of so many talented people. This type of thing makes me proud being part of the community.
The (few) explicit content in the previous builds was what initially prevented me from downloading the whole thing and instead resorted to watch youtube video for it, since they had to censor themselves the aforementionned part.
It's nice to enjoy the story to it's fullest now :-)
2 hours in so far.. VN seems very good. Wolf is cute. Tiger is cute, I'm hoping I get to see a map soon. Or some indication on what happened to Earth (I'm assuming we're on Earth due to everyone else speaking English and having phrases like "jesus" n shit) from the "7 stars". 5/5 so far though. Great art style, great writing, I do wish there was more CGs but there's probably a shit ton more in the later chapters (just finished C3)
i’ve just discovered VNs and i’ve never been so hooked on a story, it’s nothing at all what i expected from the title. the art style and the characters are the best i’ve ever seen and the story is one of the most heartwarming yet tragic things i’ve ever read.
thank you to the creators, writers, artists and soundtrack designers for creating such a masterpiece!! <3
damn this vn was really good and very far from what i was expecting strictly going off the name and cover was thinking it would be a bit of a romance and very sappy and it is in some ways but none in how i thought it would be the sci-fi also caught me off guard im really not sure how much we werent supposed to figure out on our own before it was revealed but i think everything in the story can be figured out before it happens a few things far before they do but that doesnt make it bad just less shocking the story really gets good a bit after cyrus's time with "Cooper"
About the protagonist. Those ports on his back reminds me a lot of the ones needed for drones for the hyron project, Deus ex human revolution. Are these some sort of inspiration?
This game is, by far, the best I played in a really, really long time. Everything is just so good, the music, the characters, the story, the characters development and other things. I really hope this VN gets even more attention and players, keep uo the good work!!
After just finishing chapter 16 (Currently the last chapter you can read due to obviously still being in production) and Holy sh*t. The story, the art, the character's personalities and designs, the soundtrack, etc. All of it has had me hooked since the very first chapter. This game/VN is... amazing.
11/10.
I'm unbelievably excited for whenever the next update is.
Genuinely, one of the best stories I've read and experienced. Even big companies that make games can't hold a candle to how much this game got me to feel emotionally about all the characters. I just finished it and I would rant but I don't want to waste your time. I highly recommend this game to everyone even if you aren't usually into this stuff, it is so good and I love the setup to everything. 10/10 will be keeping track of this, good job development team!
Okay, as much as I'd like to love the visual novel, the writing style is just not it for me. I get "white room" in between character dialogues and the narrative, the prose itself doesn't feel strong or evocative, especially in the scenes with slow pacing. I think the pacing definitely could be fixed to be faster than it is and the writing style could be improved. Some just feel too slow and boring. The art for the background and the characters meet my expectations well. The music is also atmospheric. Overall the writing just needs quite a bit of work.
So far characterization is really well done so far.
However, I'm still in Chapter 4 and my thoughts are subject to change.
This story had me borderline crying once Cyrus got his memories back and when he visited his home. I love how this Story didn't get afraid to get real dark and real quick. Easily one of the VN's I've ever read.
i just read up to the part were cyrus finally meets titiania and i kept imagining if she was acutally diana our childhood friend and her code name was titania but a little dissapointed but still nice that we finally get to see her, she looks super badass
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I'm familiar with crying due to tragic things happening in fiction, but this is one of those great pieces of art where the characters are written so well that I find myself crying even more when I get to see the characters thriving.
CHAPER 17 WOOOOO
Y'know, the game was fucking amazing through all of chapters 1-16, but I think chapter 17 pushed it over the edge, and sent it hurdling down at the speed of light into the gaping hole known as "perfect". First VN to make me cry tears of happiness AND sadness, so for that, I thank you. I cannot wait for the next chapter, and the side-stories. Will definitely be buying the Patreon when chapter 18 releases.
Extra note: I can't wait to see King, Darius and Lance die. None of them are redeemable. Eternal torture and suffering first, though.
Yeah, but I believe in Artemis supremacy
kill him as well
No, never, he's an icon. He has earned absolute power
Now I'm wearing a white raincoat and trousers just like him. Intelligence and fashion icon.
King is mine, you can't kill him. 💅🏿
he needs death, he hurt aaron. nobody fucks with aaron without some PROPER consequences (he shouldve lost more than 1 arm)
I will, like, uh
protect him, yeah. Tee-hee
agreed
17 глава спасибо!! Хочу увидеть Coopera
I am so insanely invested in Cyrus and Axel's relationship that it's not even funny. I love these two together way too goddamn much..
FINALLY CHAPTER 17
Duuuuude, this VN rocks so much! Each update, and I'm hooked more and more. Amazing piece of media, such great work of so many talented people. This type of thing makes me proud being part of the community.
Thank you, thank you so much! :^)
Lance <3
An acquired taste, but not wrong <3
Is this vn NSFW?
NSFW meaning it may have some blood and gorey imagery on occassion, but there is no sexual content.
Thx for that by the way.
The (few) explicit content in the previous builds was what initially prevented me from downloading the whole thing and instead resorted to watch youtube video for it, since they had to censor themselves the aforementionned part.
It's nice to enjoy the story to it's fullest now :-)
2 hours in so far.. VN seems very good. Wolf is cute. Tiger is cute, I'm hoping I get to see a map soon. Or some indication on what happened to Earth (I'm assuming we're on Earth due to everyone else speaking English and having phrases like "jesus" n shit) from the "7 stars". 5/5 so far though. Great art style, great writing, I do wish there was more CGs but there's probably a shit ton more in the later chapters (just finished C3)
There's quite a few more CGs and the public chapter 17 update should be out within the next few days
i’ve just discovered VNs and i’ve never been so hooked on a story, it’s nothing at all what i expected from the title. the art style and the characters are the best i’ve ever seen and the story is one of the most heartwarming yet tragic things i’ve ever read.
thank you to the creators, writers, artists and soundtrack designers for creating such a masterpiece!! <3
truer words have never been spoken.
haha thanks, i loved it although im sad now that we will have to wait months for chapter 18 :/
i was confused at first cuz i havnt seen the 17th chapter yet and just saw that it dropped lwiejf'oishv;zjvJSv;oud'ouvsdoiv'osiv's pic
Y'know I've very much enjoyed the progress of this FVN and y'all are coming up on 3 years... You've done great things with this. Can't wait for more
I feel kinda humbled that this is one of my first Visual Novel experiences. Can't imagine it must have taken you all to get to this point, but bravo.
damn this vn was really good and very far from what i was expecting strictly going off the name and cover was thinking it would be a bit of a romance and very sappy and it is in some ways but none in how i thought it would be the sci-fi also caught me off guard im really not sure how much we werent supposed to figure out on our own before it was revealed but i think everything in the story can be figured out before it happens a few things far before they do but that doesnt make it bad just less shocking the story really gets good a bit after cyrus's time with "Cooper"
I have a question. Maybe the authors can answer?
About the protagonist. Those ports on his back reminds me a lot of the ones needed for drones for the hyron project, Deus ex human revolution. Are these some sort of inspiration?
Just wondering...
This game is, by far, the best I played in a really, really long time. Everything is just so good, the music, the characters, the story, the characters development and other things. I really hope this VN gets even more attention and players, keep uo the good work!!
When the release the chapter 17 in public?
based on the typical release schedule, about a month after the patreon release
any day now hopefully then
Give it anywhere from 3 to 7 days roughly
<}
Game is so good and the story is even better keep up the good work!
im not sure if this can actually be called a "game" since we arent able to effect the story in any way just yet if ever
meh who cares its still no.1 for me
it really is a good vn
i love this VN! just got done with arc 2,cant wait for the next chapters!
Need some help!
I updated the game but couldn't find the chapter 17 , what should I do?
It's for patreon for now, not general release. In one month or so the link will be 0.17 version.
one more month to go lmaoo, but thanks for the release!
FINALLY NEW CHAPTERRR
This is my favorite VN. This story has grabbed my heart and then ripped it to shreads, 10/10
ik right? so good.
Lance 😭😭😭
I can't tell you how good this VN is
So if you haven't played it yet WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR
GO PLAY IT NOW
Someone can drop me some translation for PT-BR pls?
Made an itch.io account just so I could say this.
After just finishing chapter 16 (Currently the last chapter you can read due to obviously still being in production) and Holy sh*t. The story, the art, the character's personalities and designs, the soundtrack, etc. All of it has had me hooked since the very first chapter. This game/VN is... amazing.
11/10.
I'm unbelievably excited for whenever the next update is.
Love y'all!
Honestly best vn I read just with ony let down that mc can't do naughty naughty with axel or any potential romance interest
The whole community have been showing lance all kind of love and attention he didn’t get in the story ,
I’m going to be so sad if this goes uncontinued 😭
fr
Don’t worry, the whole community is ready to help the developers to ensure the project is still going, even by force :)
Genuinely, one of the best stories I've read and experienced. Even big companies that make games can't hold a candle to how much this game got me to feel emotionally about all the characters. I just finished it and I would rant but I don't want to waste your time. I highly recommend this game to everyone even if you aren't usually into this stuff, it is so good and I love the setup to everything. 10/10 will be keeping track of this, good job development team!
Okay, as much as I'd like to love the visual novel, the writing style is just not it for me. I get "white room" in between character dialogues and the narrative, the prose itself doesn't feel strong or evocative, especially in the scenes with slow pacing. I think the pacing definitely could be fixed to be faster than it is and the writing style could be improved. Some just feel too slow and boring. The art for the background and the characters meet my expectations well. The music is also atmospheric. Overall the writing just needs quite a bit of work.
So far characterization is really well done so far.
However, I'm still in Chapter 4 and my thoughts are subject to change.
Well yeah it was a bit slow in the earlier chapters but it does pick up.
But I think the writing is good. Thou they did remove a few things that I wished stayed.
thought that i could get through this, even after the cooper arc
then chapter 9 happened
dont even know if I can keep playing IT HURTSSS
Its been 134 months 😔
Yeah... I think unfinished fvns are the rule...
This Game Is Amazing🔥
Also
I Need More 10000000000/10
This story had me borderline crying once Cyrus got his memories back and when he visited his home. I love how this Story didn't get afraid to get real dark and real quick. Easily one of the VN's I've ever read.
i just read up to the part were cyrus finally meets titiania and i kept imagining if she was acutally diana our childhood friend and her code name was titania but a little dissapointed but still nice that we finally get to see her, she looks super badass
Any news on the next build. Wonder if I missed a Taking a Break notice.
A new build was planned to be released over a month ago, but I guess something caused a delay?
I hate you... but I love you... but I hate you... Cooper!!!😭😭I like Axel but I love Cooper even more😭
this makes me both very happy and really sad 10/10
I CAN FIX HIM